Thursday, May 6, 2010

How to write a A+ thesis statement

Since John F. Kennedy was a very influential president, this is the reason why their is alotta controveries about his assasination.

1 comment:

  1. Another possible thesis statement could be:

    Since John F. Kennedy was a very influential president, there is a lot of controversy about his assasination.

    Good start Joaquin! Keep up the good work.

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